You're quite talented.
I don't see a problem with the sound and how it was recorded. Kind of adds something to the feel. When it gets to 00:50 it sounds kind of manic. Keeping what was before that and expanding upon it would make for one hell of a foundation for a complete song. It's worth building on this. "It's not the best song I've made"? I'd love to hear the others. From PabMo.
thanks for the insightful review, i was planning on making it a slow song but i was jamming along one day and started to play faster and faster and kind of liked it, ill upload others when ive got the time and the right circumstances to avoid background noise
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